Oh lord, kill me today,
but kill her too,
so that both our souls
are liberated
to spend the eternity
together…
This cage of a body
doesn\’t promise me
her hand
her love
her everything everytime everywhere.
I can\’t die
before her.
And she can\’t
leave me alone here
even for a moment.
Kill her today, but,
kill me too,
so that out of the bounds
of these bodies,
we spend eternity
together…
Anupam Choudhury 
An interesting concept. No use of poetic-sounding words as a crutch to cover up for a lack of substance. It is deep and impactful and real that I was surprised by the quality! Keep expanding yourself towards writing artistically!
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Reminds me of a coment made by you long time back….. this is just a more poetic expression of that thought.
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